i was waljking down the street when i saw a small wooden box by the road. suddenly, i heard a voice say, "help let me out of here!" to my surprice, the voice was coming fom the box.
i wanted to help the strange thing that was in the box , I approached to the box, It had somo numbers, the numbers was one, three and four, it seems like a marker number, those numbers belinged to the airport. finally i decided to open the box, the box was dark, just i achieved to see two big eyes and it continued excaiming let me out of here!" .
when i put out the strange thing it shook its body for put out the dust, finally i achieved to see what really was it. It was a beautiful bear thet fell down from the plane, the bear was course to the zoo in new york.
The bear was sad because some men got out from its home to sendding to the zoo, i wanted to help it sending taking it to its home with its family.
Oscar alejandro soto english
Wednesday, May 9, 2012
Friday, April 27, 2012
PLOT WORKSHEET RUBRIC
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PLOT
WORKSHEET RUBRIC RAPUNZEL
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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Content
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All of the plot
boxes are filled
in with
important
events from the
story. The
events are in
sequential
order
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One of the plot
boxes is empty
or has
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Two or three of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Four or more of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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4
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Spelling and
Punctuation
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors.
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There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error.
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There are two three
spelling
and
punctuation
errors.
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There are more
than three
spelling and
punctuation
errors.
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4
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Neatness
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Work is neatly
done.
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Work has one
or two areas
that are sloppy.
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Work has three
or four areas
that are sloppy.
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Work is
Illegible.
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3
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TOTAL à
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3.6
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Teacher Comments
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Is a really interesting
book for children´s learning. Its characters make a important role in the
story.
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PLOT
WORKSHEET RUBRIC Little Red Riding Hood
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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Content
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All of the plot
boxes are filled
in with
important
events from the
story. The
events are in
sequential
order
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One of the plot
boxes is empty
or has
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Two or three of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Four or more of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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3
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Spelling and
Punctuation
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors.
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There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error.
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There are two three
spelling
and
punctuation
errors.
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There are more
than three
spelling and
punctuation
errors.
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4
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Neatness
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Work is neatly
done.
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Work has one
or two areas
that are sloppy.
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Work has three
or four areas
that are sloppy.
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Work is
Illegible.
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4
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TOTAL à
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3.6
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Teacher Comments
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Little Red Riding
Hood is a beautiful book it gives so many learning message, also there are
some scenes shows violence, is not recommendable the child see it.
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PLOT
WORKSHEET RUBRIC PINOCCHIO
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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Content
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All of the plot
boxes are filled
in with
important
events from the
story. The
events are in
sequential
order
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One of the plot
boxes is empty
or has
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Two or three of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Four or more of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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4
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Spelling and
Punctuation
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors.
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There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error.
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There are two three
spelling
and
punctuation
errors.
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There are more
than three
spelling and
punctuation
errors.
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4
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Neatness
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Work is neatly
done.
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Work has one
or two areas
that are sloppy.
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Work has three
or four areas
that are sloppy.
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Work is
Illegible.
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4
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TOTAL à
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4.0
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Teacher Comments
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PINOCCHIO is my best
children´s book, it has important learning
messages such as obedience, learn to not say lies, make the good actions,
love to father ,etc.
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PLOT
WORKSHEET RUBRIC ALADDIN
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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Content
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All of the plot
boxes are filled
in with
important
events from the
story. The
events are in
sequential
order
|
One of the plot
boxes is empty
or has
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
|
Two or three of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Four or more of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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3
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Spelling and
Punctuation
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors.
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There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error.
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There are two three
spelling
and
punctuation
errors.
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There are more
than three
spelling and
punctuation
errors.
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3
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Neatness
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Work is neatly
done.
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Work has one
or two areas
that are sloppy.
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Work has three
or four areas
that are sloppy.
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Work is
Illegible.
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4
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TOTAL à
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3.3
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Teacher Comments
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Is a fantastic tale,
it takes us for another culture, the story tries to connect so many people
for follow the message
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PLOT
WORKSHEET RUBRIC CINDIRELLA
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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Content
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All of the plot
boxes are filled
in with
important
events from the
story. The
events are in
sequential
order
|
One of the plot
boxes is empty
or has
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
|
Two or three of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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Four or more of
the plot boxes
are empty or
have
information that
is inaccurate or
not in
sequential
order.
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4
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Spelling and
Punctuation
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors.
|
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error.
|
There are two three
spelling
and
punctuation
errors.
|
There are more
than three
spelling and
punctuation
errors.
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4
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Neatness
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Work is neatly
done.
|
Work has one
or two areas
that are sloppy.
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Work has three
or four areas
that are sloppy.
|
Work is
Illegible.
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4
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TOTAL à
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4.0
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Teacher Comments
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Is a tender tale,
but with the other version has changed the main message
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